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Revised piece– two pieces into one

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Revised piece- remove line breaks

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Revised Piece- cut in half

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Revised Piece- change tenses

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Revised Piece- backwards

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Revised Piece- chop off beginning/end AND change POV

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Revised Piece- form changed

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Revised Piece- prose put into line breaks

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Revised piece- cut up and reorganized

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